11SC August 2008 Entry - Enojarse Abogado (Angry Lawyer)

[afu]

Hey there,

How are you doing?

Voting on 11 Second Club is on its way. And here is my piece. The clip is in Spanish taken from the movie "12 Angry Men".

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ACxPBrwPRj4

Make sure, you vote for your favourites!

Take care

[Irfanahmed]

Abid bhai jeet g** ho yar .

boht Aaala . kmal hai jee.

5 se ooper he milay ga vote
me ne 6 de dia hai

thoray se oor emotions ki variation aa jati oor thought process add ho jata to boht aala hai. R 2nd character ki animation achi hai lakin thora oor add kia ja sakta tha to add life in it.

Baki boht kamal hai. jeet g** ho yar . Acting choice b boht achi hai .

Keep good work

[afu]

Thanks Mr. Irfan.

Are you going for the next month?

[V.FOX]

nice yaar very nice

[AliAhsan]

Good job Aabid, animating in a foreign language sure is challenging. You came out with a fine piece.

Hope you win this @ 11 sec.

Keep it up and do share your process with us, when you have the time.

[Hassan]

Interesting !

Although i cannot understand whats going on .
In the beginning the tone sounds very abusive

As far as I can understand , if the other guy is a reporter , then maybe there couldve been some work done on the camera side ( composition wise and slight camera movement ) , like giving a little hint of the existence of the cameraman maybe . . And maybe the big guys eye looking at least once in the camera etc .
The big guy couldve been a little more expressive as well , or maybe the mustache are taking a lot of attention . overtaking the nice facial animation .

Other than that , I still wondering how you managed to do in a foreign language. That must have been really tricky .

and yes do share your breakdowns
goodluck

[Art]

Nice work Abid ... Changing of mood and expression part is Very well Done...

Regards

[zedtech]

cool animation and very nice job buddy,

this months audio was really tricky and you have done a good job on it. best of luck.

keep sharing and one more thing please share the english translation.

i am waiting for the process.

[MOOSA]

nice man

[afu]

Hmm let starts with the simplest.

First of all, thanks to Ashraf, Shahan and Ahsan Aamir Moosa for commenting and appreciating.

Hassan bhai, yes I have noted too and many others, in start, it seems to have an abusive sound . However, its just the word "Cada Cosa" two times, which means "everything". I totally agree with you. I haven't done anything at that side. But I got the picture, and is a really cool composition. It would enhanced the overall shot. I will remember to keep in mind to work on that too, on my future animations.

Ali Ahsan bhai, thank you and also for the cover award. However, results of 11secondClub are out, and am holding the position at 19th out of 82 entries. Although, its started rough, but when planning was done and all the things were in front of me, then I could not resist. It was really a great experience for me to get involved in it.

And Zohaib, thanks. I will share my process and breakdowns by tomorrow as limited time for today. Its not that complicated. However I do post the English version, which is as follows:

Spanish: "Cada cosa, cada cosa que se dijo y se mostró en la sala de ese tribunal, todas! demuestran que es culpable. ¿Qué se cree, que soy idiota?"

English: "Everything, everything that was said and shown in that courtroom, all of them! prove that he's guilty. What do you think, that I'm an idiot?"

This is the translation provided by 11SC.

For now, taking the break.

See you soon,

Take care and thanks to all of you once again.

[saad3d]

hy thx afu for the translation

nice animation , athough there is alwys room for improvements ,
u did a fine job
els watting for breakdowns

[Hassan]

congtats Aabid !

That is a great achievement ! . You are not far from winning one soon InshAllah .

I know there is a lot to do in Ten Seconds

and thanks for the translation .

[venomx]

kool work dude, the body language the expression, and specially the delivery of the monologue every thing is 10/10

[jacob]

nice very nice .Fantastic animation bro..

[kontectme]

thts cool buddy, excellent piece of expressions.